An innocent bloom
Of fair bittersweet endured
By a fatal drink
Author notes
this is my first haiku so bare with me of its own simplicity.
i tried to refer the haiku with the picture that's in the contest. i hope it did well ^^
the flower grows and its taste fed a hummingbird.
just saying, see ya!
A contest entry
- Traditional Haiku & Senryu by liquidmindforever.
800 points, ended May 3, 2008, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
i wonder...is the haiku, ok?
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good luck in contest
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awsome haiku, i love it, it makes me feel something i'm not sure what. but you're a natural haikuist(if that's even a word). good luck.
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this is amazing, no way in hell is this your first haiku... i love it.. thanks for entering and good luck... plz put option number in notes!
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Awesome
for your first attempt..Imagery throughout and captured it at the end..Keep Writiing, and thank you
for entering..Good luck, Brenda
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Ooh, this is very good. I like haikus and this one I like very much. Nice work xx
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thanks!
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Wow. I think this is amazing for your first haiku. This is lovely.
Good luck in the contest and have a wonderful day,
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thanks for the comment and wishing me luck. hope you have a wonderful day, too.
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