Obstacles cover life,
Like a silvery-gray cloud in the sky.
They spread out across the years
And make living seem quite the opposite of high.
But it should be known
That where there is gray,
There will be another day
With little hints of light peering through
Beautiful ribbons of blue.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a very positive little poem. I'm wondering how I did not see it before. It's true that there are obstacles in life but we all need to look past them. Thanks for bringing that forward to readers.
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I like this is short and to the point to came together really nice at the end it has a lot of meaning and power yet so short my kind of poem. Thank you so much for entering my contest You did good with the picture i liked your style.
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I can picture nature offering ribbons of blue to chase away those sad days.
Well written.
John
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