You c.a.r.e.s.s with an itchy
[[fist]]
I'll smile my bloody smile.
&&
Gaze l.o.v.i.n.g.l.y from swollen eyes.
[[Black && Blue]]
Is how you say [I.Love.You]
&& I open my heart,, open my l.e.g.s
To say [I.Love.You.Too]
NotThatItMatters.
When I'm b.a.t.t.e.r.e.d on the floor.
[[Is it sad?]]
To. Live. This. Way.
[[When he hits me it gives me butterflies]]
<3
Author notes
4. Baby, I'm bruised by lies already, don't lie to me anymore.
A contest entry
- Invite Only, Come && See if ur Name is here by AshliiAsphyxiation.
1000 points, ended June 10, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Reminds me of my ex, anything he wanted he would use his fist or manipulation to get it. Hate those types.
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ooh; this is very dirtypretty. excellent.
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Thanks
xXxPurexXx
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W....O.......O!!!!!!!!!!!
This has got to be one of your best in my opinion. Great job.
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wowie.. this is beautifull darling!!
xoxo
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wow!!
this is intense!!
much better than the one i did
for the contest
[with the same quote!]
good job! -
wow i love this one
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eh,
you get what you ask for
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eh,
This isn't true sweetheart, it was for a contest.
You have spurges or something?
First with the ginger, now this?
tut tut.
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wow this poem is painfully beautiful, good luck in the contest
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