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Black && Blue.

You c.a.r.e.s.s with an itchy

[[fist]]

I'll smile my bloody smile.

&&

Gaze l.o.v.i.n.g.l.y from swollen eyes.

[[Black && Blue]]

Is how you say [I.Love.You]

&& I open my heart,, open my l.e.g.s

To say [I.Love.You.Too]

NotThatItMatters.

When I'm b.a.t.t.e.r.e.d on the floor.

[[Is it sad?]]

To. Live. This. Way.

[[When he hits me it gives me butterflies]]

<3


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4. Baby, I'm bruised by lies already, don't lie to me anymore.

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  • Midnight-x-Rose gold member
    December 30, 2008

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    Reminds me of my ex, anything he wanted he would use his fist or manipulation to get it. Hate those types.

  • Candy Morphine
    December 23, 2008
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    ooh; this is very dirtypretty. excellent.

  • Broken barbie
    June 13, 2007
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    W....O.......O!!!!!!!!!!!

    This has got to be one of your best in my opinion. Great job.


  • AshliiAsphyxiation
    June 10, 2007
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    wowie.. this is beautifull darling!!

    xoxo


  • oh willoughby
    June 2, 2007

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    wow!!

    this is intense!!

    much better than the one i did
    for the contest
    [with the same quote!]

    good job!

  • aloneintheworld
    June 1, 2007
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    wow i love this one


  • Dresden
    June 1, 2007
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    eh,

    you get what you ask for

    • PureAmethyst
      June 1, 2007
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      eh,

      This isn't true sweetheart, it was for a contest.

      You have spurges or something?

      First with the ginger, now this?

      tut tut.

  • You Found Me
    May 28, 2007
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    wow this poem is painfully beautiful, good luck in the contest

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