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Feelings of love

I've wrote a little something, its not done yet, but its all I get. Please comment or suggest me! Because I need some help to get writing poems back into my mind,

Love.


tears of love, found in your soul
tears of sadness, found in your heart
destroy the pain in your heart
let love heal your wounds

the sweet scent of love, blown into my heart
Blown into my soul
to live and to love, forever
the loving embrace of our hearts, when two become one

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sadness because of love
tears because of love
A tear because I love you
A tear because I miss you
A tear of happyness
A tear because you mean the world to me

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