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Turkish Delight Temptations

I remember the night
spent with my Turkish delight
Fireworks dispersed sparkling light
Craved for blazing sensations
Your amorous delights were my temptations.

You always act on me with your provocations
Of my appetite that is yearning for your kiss’ delight
king of my dreams and sweet sultan, ruler of my fragrant night

Cleo the Sweet, soaked syrup in her ambrosial dates' nectar
Is offering you dainty morsels of her savory pleasure,
A Lorelei in her delicious aromatic melodious wonder,
A temptress, arousing your senses, with arts to fall under,
A dulcet so exceptional winning hearts with her candor
rose water, a redolent, spicy and enticing love rite
only seeking the embrace of her Sultan and his might
But I always remember the jubilant night;
The night I spent with my Turkish delight.

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  • NooNiThEWitcH
    June 12, 2007

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    You love Turkish Delight and pun intended here! lol
    Wondeful poem! Very nicely written,
    The background is beautiful but I had to select all in order to read.. you might want to change the font colour..

    Other than that, awesome,
    Keep on writing,

    Nooni


    • cleo the sweet
      June 12, 2007
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      right you are bautiful

      i looooooooove turkish delight lol
      and right again i changed the font color. it was terrible