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Movies About Losing

So my mind turned to protest, the mass majority lies.
Something so familiar, so easy on the eye. And love is something I adhere to, and life ain't the kind of decision to take so lightly,
so come on and give me some familiar sense of pride, so easy on the eye.

And my mind turns to protest, the masked minority dies.
Something unfamiliar, yet so easy on the eye.
And this ain't something I adhere to, and this ain't something I afford myself to think too much.
But lately I found something so easy on their eyes, a side of me so easy, so easy to despise.

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  • Dragen2201
    June 22, 2007
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    WOW

    I love it and it is definately easy on the eyes.

  • shinji03
    June 22, 2007
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    Wow...i'm speechless
    this was definatelly a pleasant read =)
    thank you.


  • Poetic Rage
    June 4, 2007
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    I really liked what these two lines have to say...They explain alot to what you are trying to make the reader understand.....

    And my mind turns to protest, the masked minority dies.
    Something unfamiliar, yet so easy on the eye.

    Great Write...


  • zhaniswolf
    May 29, 2007

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    the last part of it: "But lately I found something so easy on their eyes, a side of me so easy, so easy to despise." was a great way to end this poem. great job and good luck in my contest.