I have to study, study, study
Till i drop.
I have to study, study, study
I can't stop!
I'm obsessive! Compulsive!
My head is not alright!
I have to study for that test
Before tonight!!
Hit my books!
Read my notes!
Important dates!
Famous quotes!
After three hours at my desk,
i grow old and wise.
I'm sure that i am smarter now,
My confidence starts to rise. . .
I walk into the classroom,
With my head held high,
I look at the quiz paper -
Oh no! I'm gonna die!
I stare down at the questions,
And lose all my self - reliance,
I spent three hours studying history. . .
And the test was on science!
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A contest entry
- BE HILARIOUS AND MAKE EVERY ONE LAUGH. by Mekhala.
400 points, ended June 4, 2007, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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LOL. Now this was one funny poem and i'm not a bit surprised to see that you won a gold with it. Thanks so much for posting.
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hahahaha ...
Fantastic use of structure to communicate a frenzy. Thanks for the write. Love, Sultan.
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great write
wow this is so good ...i could feel the excitement the pantic the complusiveness...so emotion filled...it is a plaeasure to read ...I see why you recieved the Gold...keep up the good writes ....Peace Katie.
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Very funny indeed! That last line is brilliant! Thanks for sharing this piece... x Love and light, Butterfly.
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haha, hun this was funny. very silly and made me smile. the rhyme is great, hun =]
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Heeheehee! I entered this contest and (after fuming that it was not me) had to see who had won! This is really great, although I should be revising (or tidying my room) this very minute. Eek!
Congrats
Katie -
Congratulations. A well deserved Gold. I love rhyme and humour, and if they are well exectuted when put together, like this one, you earn all the applause and more.
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hahahahahahahahahaha...
I'll comment as soon as I finish laughing... this has triggered my laughing nerve... hahahahahahaha... Congratulations on winning Gold... you deserved it by far...
mina
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lol......this is really hillarious...but i wonder how it feels when it really happens...anyway...keep it up!!!thanks for the entry...
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I love the idea of this poem. This poem is good, but I think that you could make it even better. Thank you for entering my contest.
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Wow thats good and really funny
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Hahaha. Cute. I didn't expect the end.
Have a wonderful day and god luck in the contests,
FallenPoeticAngel
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