I am not a whole. I am a fraction.
Love is a chemical reaction.
Life is a cocktail of combinations
Mystic correlations and sensations.
When I seek the truth, I find confusion
Even you’re not true – you’re an illusion.
You are my irrational desire
That’s why I adore you and admire.
I’m your substance ready for some action
Make me one – start chemical reaction.
Author notes
Twisted Magic. My name is Anastasiya
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Hm an interesting way to think about love, I did like this though. Nice rhyming, not forced at all. I also enjoyed the repition. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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This is a really good poem.. i like it.. sorry its taking so long.. lots of stuff goin on as the break is comeing to an end.. lol.. thanks for joining and good luck in the contest..
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wow, i love the rhyming in this, it isnt cliche like most, and I love how you put it into perspective....best of luck!
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I love it but have sworn I have read this word for word somewhere else...??? or is it just me? anyway very well written it is perfect electrifying love with chemical reactions that two substances can combine to make compound love. fantastic all to do with fusion and biological science. wow good luck
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I could've definately done with this in my science lessons last year... It would've made the whole GCSE experience a lot more fun. Very good use of vocabulary and beautiful imagery of the chemicals all mixing together. Really enjoyed reading this one my chemical friend. Thanks once more! x
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Intense indeed...it uses the word chemical..witty..i likey..good luck
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I like this poem. Especially I like the very intense alliteration and rhyming, it's very tight.
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