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Desperation Reigns

Fearless demons of dark domains
rip forth our flesh before our kings.

Let humanity crumble
in fiery pain.

Misconceptions,
Desperation reigns!

You love my loss,
you blossom through my disease.

Constantly
eroding me.

I drink from the springs
of eternal life.

All I receive is a concoction
for grief and strife.

Eating the souls of
both man and beast.

Neither stand strong against
those who feast.

Upon us, these demons,
inside of me...

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I CHOSE OPTION # 14

I chose it simply because I always enjoy writing a poem when I can see words just fit into place within an already interesting Idea, or to see one form out of what once were just words.

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  • Wild Mustang
    May 28, 2007

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    I love this! You're the only one who's even attempted to tackle the word bank option (lazy people, huh ?), but you did it wonderfully! Great job! Good luck in the contest and thank you very much for entering!

    ~ Wild