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Abstract Murmers

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Time flies like a bloody rock bouncing to the ground,
thrown for no more apparent reason than to cause harm.

The ticking is maddening, or is it the pulse in my ears?
Hysteria at the ways of the world making me cringe.

Nonsence writings on schoolroom walls makes me dream.
Saccharin smiles on plaster faces in the rain, melting.

The silence screaming to break it, none answering.
Silenty, shoulders heaving, I weep.



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  • pvenugopal
    October 30
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    very abstract. the last four lines very evocative.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 9, 2007

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    This is another type of piece that makes the mind ponder.....a wonderful job here, thanks for sharing yet another great piece.


  • cheaphotelsign
    June 22, 2007
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    blew my mind. is my mind!


  • Swan song gold member
    May 28, 2007
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    Very nice indeed good form everyting nice job!


  • The Cube
    May 28, 2007
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    Good work on this one. Love the abstractional use as well. Good luck to you.

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