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Love is In the Air

The gift of love

  Is a beautiful thing.

It can make a broken heart mend.

  And give you voice a reason to sing.

 

It can make your day.

  Give you a reason to live and laugh.

Get on your feet and enjoy the new day.

  Bring joy into what you want to say.

 

Your steps are bound to be much higher.

  Your hopes for the future will grow.

With a brighter out look on life.

  As you step higher in the air.

 

Your kindness reaches every heart.

  With warmth that can warm everyone.

Your goal in life has a new start.

  Your love for each other has come true.

 

 

   "PETS ARE A WONDERFUL AND FUN"

 

 

8-11-2003

Author notes

LOVE WITH TWO LEGS AND MORE

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    May 30, 2007
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    smiling

    A delightful entry. Glad to see a nice trophy on this piece. ~Pam


  • Shakari
    May 28, 2007
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    This piece is so beautiful! There is no bond as strong as one with a human being and an animal companion. I find it a beautiful thing and you have described it flawlessly. I loved the flow, the emotions, and the subtle personification(i.e. kindness reaching hearts). Keep up the great work and good luck in the contest!


  • intanglio2ring
    May 27, 2007

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    Great Job!

    Dear Mac,
    I see you've already made it to the finalists with this lovely.
    You picked a great subject - our pets - to do your poem on.
    Good Luck in this contest!
    Tang


  • ibsons hysops
    May 27, 2007
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    These are the thoughts that amaze me! Good Luck in the Contest!