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A special prom

I went to a special prom
But, my school did not sponsor it.
I did feel odd being there.
I cannot recall all who was there.
I was told the Prom Queen’s name was Nancy
And, the Prom King’s name was Butch.
They were an odd pair.
They seem to want to dance with someone else.
Their dance was like smiling when you have a toothache.
All the girls envied Nancy’s dress besides getting the title.
Oh, I felt Nancy was such a drag.
All the other boys, likewise, felt the same with Butch.
Oh what a terror to find out that the Prom Queen was also a drag queen.
The tremors arose to me when I realized I was the only one straight there.

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I did not attend this attend this kind of prom

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  • pattyann4500
    June 11, 2008

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    I think you missed the point of the contest. This one was for erotica, and I'm so glad you did miss it! The last line is bound to be a classic. LOL


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 30, 2007
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    ROFL. That was freaking hilarious.
    Write on!
    ~*~SP~*~


  • SinningSaint
    September 29, 2007
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    odd, but nice.

    I'm sorry to say that this kind of a piece is not what I'm looking for in my contest, but outside of that, I really liked what you did here.
    It was a very obscure piece, but that made it all the better. I loved the clever thought of this scenario, I don't think I've ever seen someone write about some thing like this before. Excellent job, keep writing!