Dawning of creation
Destiny commences
Determining man's fate.
Does he choose Life and Love?
Does he choose death and dread?
Delight is at his hand.
Death has been defeated.
Author notes
"Now the LORD God had planted a garden in the east, in Eden; and there he put the man he had formed. And the LORD God made all kinds of trees grow out of the ground—trees that were pleasing to the eye and good for food. In the middle of the garden were the tree of life and the tree of the knowledge of good and evil." Genesis 2:8-9
This is the first time I have written in this form. I like it.
Pleiades Form - Title 1 word, 7 lines, 6 syllables per line, each line begins with the same first letter that is in the title.
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Nice title. Good write. Thought provoking. Perfect form. Good flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. Nice word choice, alliteration and assonance. Your faith shines through in this piece. My only observation is that in this form, since it is short, each first word of each line should be different. Other than that, this is a fine write. Thank you for your entry. Shelley
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Oh, what a uniquely fine way to complement the picture, and this is your first?! Wow...I'd say you did a fine job on your very first Pleiades! Good Luck in the contest and all the best!
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Congratulations on this awesome Pleiades! If this is just your first attempt then what will you be like when you're a dab hand, I ask myself?! This is gorgeous - the message is spot on - the picture is unbelievably appropriate and the whole thing would look STUNNING framed in my living room!!! XX
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You are way too kind. Thank you so much!
- jo
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Magnificent
Magnificent visuals,along with the auditory and abstract images heighten the effect.
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