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Love Birds

Fire blazing
White and pale gold

Heat engulfing
powerfully soothing
And yet overpowering


Rain falls
Large spaced pregant drops

Cool kisses
Blessing each body
Rising in steam


Drums call
Responding, bodys move

Rhythmicly moving
Beings taking flight
Soaring as one


Embraced
I am with you

Merged and melting
Dancing and fling
Around the fire with you

Author notes

::smiles:: Love exsist..in all the places we cesse to see it.

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  • poisonsilver
    May 29, 2007

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    Oh wow... this is amazing i can just picture the music playing and a person dancing to it. absolutely beautiful writing!
    I miss reading your stuff i really do- i miss chatting with you... :-)

    ~your poison

    • SternBlinkin
      May 30, 2007
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      Thanks. I've posted I think four others if you want to read some newer stuff. How are you? It's been a while? Still in school? send me an e-mail some times:
      beautyinme88@yahoo.com