Face up, Rain down,
Drops hiding my sorrow
Game up, Running down
Streaks of water cross my cheeks
Building up, falling down
Water mixing with feelings
Giving up, facing down
Emotion hidden by the Rain
Please tell me what you think
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oh I forgot to clap!!! SO here you go!
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I like it
It's different from what you normally do, but I do like it. I'm slightly confused with the Game up, Running down.... but hey, I'm normally confused and you know that.
So I hope you will comment my items of intererst, because well they are lonely. And I'm trying to make this comment long so I can get points, so far so good.
Anyway, the poem is great, the lack of detail makes me feel like I could apply it to my life...blah blah (LIES!) lol.
Love yah!
~ARI
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