My darling, my heartbeat, my joy, my all
I'm sending you my love song, hear it's call
I want you to know how deeply I love you
That's why I'm sending this song so true
Let us dance while the music is slow
Hear my heartbeat it's speaking you know
My arms are holding you ever so near
I want to whisper sweet words in your ear
It's you my darling I want you to know
That my love will follow you wherever you go
My lips will always be close to your ear
So my darling my words you will hear
Long after I have left this world
My song will be sung, my words unfurled
My song will be with you all of your life
I'm sorry that I can't make you my wife
But I will always be so near to you
You will feel my love, your whole life through
For true love never dies, it just rests a while
Darling please live your life with a smile
Author notes
A contest poem
A contest entry
- Write to me...sing to me... by Angel of Musik.
700 points, ended June 16, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 7 of 7
-
Long after I have left this world
My song will be sung, my words unfurled
My song will be with you all of your life
I'm sorry that I can't make you my wife
That part truly caught my eye. it also made me slightly depressed.
Thank you. -
This is a beautiful poem of love and speaks of true love that will last a lifetime and beyond.
Good luck in the contest...Sue
-
-
Thank you for reading my poem and for your comment. I am glad you enjoyed my poem.
-
-
Excellent
If one is in love, love is what comes out. Katie, this is a wonderful piece writte4n from the heart. I wish those in love to be in a position to express their feeling like this. This is great, i would love to hear my dear sharing with hme such words. Keep this up. Good day
-
-
Thank you so kindly for reading my poem and for your comment. Express your feelings to your dear and maybe she will tell you just what you want to hear.
-
-
Wow this is so sweet!!!
-
-
Thank you babgurl-lepz. I don't know how I overlooked your comment. Thanks for reading my poem.
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 7 of 7
