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Feel The Minerals Crush Her Bones

And she
falls to the ground
where the Earth's soil
freezes throughout her body
Nothing changes.
Time stands still
but dizzy clouds go by
as it gradually rains.
And she
waits for the sun
to scream his goodbyes
so her love will return
just to feel
hope, love, fate, tragety.
all at once
And you
still dont understand
continually asking why.
and you will never know
even if you try.
even if life pushes that girl
deeper and deeper
through the Earth's crust.
And she whispers so soft
but you listen
"give it up"

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