I see you and want you.
Can't you see?
I need you by my side.
You complete me.
NO! I can't give in,
Not this time.
Going back after all this,
Is surely a crime.
But you're my everything,
My rock that keeps me strong.
Being without you,
Feels so incredibly wrong.
NO! NO! That's not true,
You mean to me ZERO.
For getting rid of you,
I am my own hero.
We were in love,
I need you still.
What about all the dreams,
We never got to fulfill?
NO! NO! NO!
I can't go down this road once more.
So I turn the other way,
And you I ignore.
Author notes
As I'm sure you can tell I am still on my whole "breakup" kick. I'll have some different stuff soon, I promise. This stuff is probably getting rather boring.
But yes, Comments Appreciated.
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Thoughts? Comments?
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=) i loved this poem. it was such a great write, and i'm sure that many people can relate to it. even me : but life goes on and we should make the best of what's happening to us right now. =)
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i absolutely loved this from you. wonderfully done. ~ saddened.
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I love it! I love the alternating of I want you and I don't want you. It works. And man, do I know how you feel!!! Some of the rhythm is a little off at times, particularly the last stanza (that second line is looong) but overall it works well. I love the line "I am my own hero". It's a beautiful sentiment and very true. Does this help?
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