I was your tear for a day
I was the meaning of your pain
I was reminded that the same
Thing would become of me
Over and over
But before I could see
Your beauty crept into me
And made it's home inside my heart
I was done being picked apart
I was your tear
Your meaning to die
But now that we've survived
You've no longer a reason to cry
~*~
In your eyes
I was born, and
I lived on your cheek, and
I stayed for a while
Down your face, I rolled, and
On your lips, I died, and
Now you know I'm alive
Every time that you cry
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I have a reason to smile
So come on, and stay for a while
Learning how to live and love
Seeing now, our lives worth living
Stay with me in this bed
And we'll write happiness instead
Enjoying every minute of
Our unconditional, precious love
~*~
In your eyes
I was born, and
I lived down your cheek, and
I stayed for a while
Down your face, I rolled, and
On your lips, I died, and
Now that we're alive
You've no longer a reason to cry
-
My reason to smile
So stay for a while
Enjoying every minute of
Our unconditional, precious love
Author notes
I wrote this a long time ago, but just now decided to submit it to Allpoetry, so here's a song, I hope it's emotional enough to get something from this contest...
A contest entry
- Write to me...sing to me... by Angel of Musik.
700 points, ended June 16, 2007, 26 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Best of the Best of the Best, etc. by Heavenly Angel.
1500 points, ended June 13, 2007, 22 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is such an intense and very emotional song...I can't wait to hear your song because every line and every word of it is so totally amazing...I especially adore your chorus because it is a moving simple phrase...well-done dear poet..and by the way congrats to the HM and silver..you deserve them...
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Total awesomeness...
Wow, I'm blown away with the intense FEEL of this poem; I can relate
Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest -
Very well done, Thank you.
I am glad you decided to enter it.
This is one of those writes that just screams best seller. I can just hear the music in the background while I read this. Thank you.
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