Synchronized, the pulsation
of hearts in time to
the swinging of the world.
It is a penduluum
swinging back and forth.
I will catch it, and
in a silver current of
words and wishes
freeze time.
The edges are frayed
and everything
is uncertain. But as
hearts beat and the
world spins, I will
stray in this
silver current.
Words and wishes
freeze time, and I
will keep it here for
you to see, a black
and white photograph
so I can remember it
forever.
Author notes
um welll i just turned 14 but only a day or two ago so...hopefully i still kind of qualify...if not of course you can take this out of the contest...
A contest entry
- Why do you write poetry? ~ Ages 13 and Under Only by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended June 6, 2007, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Happy Birthday and thank you for being honest. I think a day or two we can let slide considering you were of age when the contest was posted
Wondefully penned !
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This was a wonderful read. One I must say I truly enjoyed through and through. I felt the flow was excellent and your expression of feelings, emotions and visuals were grand. GREAT JOB!
Blessings
Bel
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Well if you stay in even though you're 14, I think you're gonna win, or else come pretty darn close! ^^
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thank ya muchly for the comment!
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