Emotion memory,
one of nature's whiplash disasters,
stored in the least suspected sounds, or
welded together in a background smell.
Sensual triggers: violating,
associating and dissapearing,
only to tear up from a dusty cassette
and evoke some monochrome happiness
that I had. That you had.
I once threw pieces of me
into the air, years later
everything I feel brings me back there.
Author notes
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Emotion_and_memory
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you write so well. brilliant choices of words. in some sense they are technical but when you see it as a piece, they are binded together with the deepest of emotion. this poem is like a memory that sometimes fades but keep coming once in a while to pay a short visit. all in all beautifully done. like it alot. well done.
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I love the flow/form of this poem.
It's written amazingly and I enjoyed reading it again and again.
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Well done, I love it..Best of luck! ~Pastel
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Oooooo
The wee English boy does it again!!!
way to go hun, this is awesome!
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first line is great...liked the phrase.. one of nature's whip lash disasters...the truth in this is without question very surface area...anybody can recognize...but the depth of everything addressed here has many layers to explore...and you touched many of them very effectively in so few words..really liked the last line of 2nd stanza..excellent write
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