In her amber eyes
There is much sorrow
She was caught in
Between the dark demons
And the angels of light
No matter how hard or
How much she fights
She's still imprisoned
And cannot go out to
Meet her sweetheart for
That tryst they planned
Her clothes are somber
Like she's in mourning
Her mind is dwelling
In the rage of anger
Towards to her captors
The steel that holds her
Are flawless and cannot
Be broken or melted
The Lord of Darkness
Is ice cold and has
A big ambition to take
Over the world from
The Lord of the Light
She's captivated by
Him who glows with truth
And he's full of love
Unlike his loveless enemy
She looks at Him in
Adoration hoping for Him
To set her free, but
The slope of failure
Grows with each attempt
To woo one of them
Her hope is gone and
In her mind becomes
Demented with the torture
Of being away from the
Love of her life
Author notes
Option #4
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This is very sweet an true. u where very creative in the descriptions u used. very cool
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Nice flow. It's more of a story than a poem...with the exception of the format. Nevertheless, you pieced together those words very smoothly. Good luck.
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