crystal orb balances in the air
drawing in simple light from the sun;
releasing flashes of brilliant rainbow.
So we harmonize as one.
The rain impregnates the living earth.
The dim moon is brightened by her love the sun.
The ocean sunned his crest with the turn of the earth.
So together we work as one.
These mysterious influences are not ours to control.
With hearts we see without knowing.
Senses drawing power into us for sharing.
The two of us create the orb.
We hang on the air of the universe's love.
Our union radiates the brilliant rainbow.
Healing and making whole us as one.
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A contest entry
- Love or friendship by Passionate Phoenix.
850 points, ended October 22, 2007, 16 entries
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This reminds me of really good semi-pschadelic lyrics I used to hear in the early 70's. I don't know if you remember a band name Uriah Heep but this is as good as thier hit,"The Wizard" or even some early Jefferson Airplane or Pink Floyd. Thanks for the Flashback. Nice work
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this was a good write, lovely imagery used and i liked the layout - made it easier to read9!!) lol
very well done and thanks for entering! xx
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