i thought i was your wife
but now inside i see that i have died
the pain remains it has left me stained
not knowing the way back to you
if there was ever a love it be you
the one that healed my heart in his hands
the one i want to be my man
A contest entry
- Alone. Not lonely. by rainboots.
401 points, ended September 16, 10 entries
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A true romantic write. Simply and raw. Brilliantly done.
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short and sweet
might get you there.......... -
too short
but the words arevery touching. -
I always said you had an amazing heart -- And the depth of so few words strikes a nerve deep inside of me like no other, Joe just told me believe it or not that he wants to see me back with you, He just wants everyone to understand that you and me need time to heal what has been done recently, So I agree we need to get away and talk, But not only talk like Joey And Zonya both are saying we need to take time away from here and just be alone for a few days and then see where we stand from there, So with that I'll leave it up to you, The only thing is Lela how do I know for sure that this really is you...
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