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Isolation

Deprived of affection
I thrive on rejection,
An honest protection
For my inner connection,
This darkened confession
Of mental defection.

Life of extreme emotion
A disguised, ill notion
With fierce and fast motion
A brain elixer potion
Trapped in a desolate ocean!

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