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My Dearest Unborn Child

My dearest unborn child,
I'm so filled up with shame,
I put the drugs before you,
And now I take the blame.

My mind was so messed up,
But still It was so wrong.
My tears never ending,
Now that you are gone.

My darling I can promise,
I'll never go back,
And I've gave up the drugs,
The meth and the crack.

My child so precious,
I made a mistake,
And now that I've changed,
I know its to late.



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This poem is dedicated to my miscarriage-

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  • StarEyes
    June 13, 2007

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    This sent chills through me this morning. I too had a miscarriage, I can relate to the pain you live with. (For My Little Angel) is my write about the miscarriage. Thanks for sharing such a personal write. Best of luck in the contest that we are both entered in.


  • Lucca
    June 3, 2007

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    that poem is written so true and pure although it doesnt have to be the honest thing that happened. It represents what we miss out on and what we knew was once there. I missed out on being happy for about three years and before that i was happy, but it came back too me. I just had to make it a mood, and then define it as me.


  • Saosin
    June 2, 2007
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    wow this an amazing poem is soo sad and very touching im so sorrry for your loss

  • Holmes
    May 31, 2007
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    wow, that is some hardcore shit. amazing poem, made me cry.alot....


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    May 29, 2007
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    Powerful poem Congratulations on your gold trophy!


  • Viyanna Rosemarie 2
    May 29, 2007
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    this is heartbreaking to read. i am in recovery also and i pray your past does not keep you bound. thank you for your honesty and i wish you well in this contest. viyanna rosemarie

  • Viyanna Rosemarie 2
    May 29, 2007

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    this is heartbreaking to read. i am in recovery also and i pray your past does not keep you bound. thank you for your honesty and i wish you well in this contest. viyanna rosemarie


  • Emo Cowboy14
    May 29, 2007
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    damn. thats strong. your realy good. keep it up.


  • xoxjulexo10
    May 28, 2007

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    Omg... i love it
    you did such a good job writing it
    seriously.that must be really hard on you.
    good job !!


  • The Great Mother
    May 27, 2007
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    WOW

    Very heartfelt and powerful. Almost made me cry when I was reading it. It is a sad topic to think of but it does happen quite abit but i am glad that the mistake was realized and action was taken. It was a very touching piece. Wonderfully written.

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