When I came to highschool,
It was such a drag.
I was Scared and Alone,
But now I am Strong and Fearless.
Wondered,
Who I could hold on to,
Who would wait for me,
Who would pick me up and swirl me around,
Who would tickle me.
But then,
I seen something,
Well someone out of the cornor of my eye.
I continously glaced,
More than one I may add.
Then that first "Hello."
Took my breath,
I couldn't breathe.
Then I remember that day,
You grabed my hand,
And you wiped my tear,
Kissed me on my cheek,
And pulled me near.
You wispered softly in my ear,
"Baby, Don't cry I am here."
That instant I fell inlove,
I knew that no one else could love,
Or make me love,
As much as I did then,
And as much as I do now.
"I'll keep you up forever,
I will never let you fall.
I wouldn't make you cry for the world."
You said to me.
With a tear in your eye,
You quickly wiped away,
Then you quoted,
"Just don't be afraid,
Don't hold back,
Don't put up your wall.
Baby, I Love You."
Then the other day,
You said to me,
"Do you still remeber,
What I said to you the other day?
Well I still mean it to this very day.
I Love You more than I did then,
I Love You more than you will know,
I just can't explaine to you baby,
All I can do is let my feelings show."
A contest entry
- Love and relationships. by Sonofdead.
450 points, ended June 5, 2007, 17 entries
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very sweet. I had this once...but it seems like you kept it. GREAT! don't never let it go and thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest.
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Man you must be in love, i must say i like it, i can see it whit me and my girl frind... the neaverending love^^ it is great
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Very well put, love is a precious and hard thing to find. When you find it hold on to with all you have.
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This is really good. I like it.
With a tear in your eye,
You quickly wiped away,
Then you quoted,
"Just don't be afraid,
Don't hold back,
Don't put up your wall.
Baby, I Love You."
I like this bit. Sometimes, I swear you people read my poems to get into my head. But oh well. -
This was really really good. I loved it. It had a good rhyme scheme to it.
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wow this is really good it shows real emotion in it!! i love it is is awesome!!! wow that is all i can say!!!
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