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incongruous

beat me with your love
treat me with your temperament
bend me like the steal I am
jerk Jimmy back in anger
send me free to foolery
love me Cleopatra
magic make me trapped tragically
mark me like the seal I am
work me with your eye surgery
lie me with lies
peel me, your banana
lose me Delilah

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  • Cupcrazy gold member
    May 30, 2007

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    A nice pice, good rhythm and flow. Although I couldn't really get any emotion or the true essence of this piece to speak to me. Thnaks for your fine entry. Hugs, Bunny