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A pencil and a paper

I sit quiet as my mind draws lines,
As i draw lines with dots that criss
and than cross, without a word i say
              a lot

       

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    May 27, 2007

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    Wow

    The job is so big and huge that needs to be handled, that help of any kind is needed. if you can do something, anything of value, with or without words then by George bring it on...you see, When a building is burning-it's up to all in the vacity to do whatever they can - if you can sing, and fire diminishes, then sing til the fat lady dances, or whatever. If you can
    look at a fire and your gaze send out water waves, then
    stare down the fire until you can hold your eyes open no longer, and until your twin brother takes over, we have to make this a concerted effort or else--cause on the back of one man, can't ride the whole show.
    Thanks for entering and sharing with us in this my first contest.