Love so dear,
to our hearts,
Love feels so near,
between lovers,
When the sun sets,
the love rises,
Holding hands,
feeling sand between our toes,
Sun rise,
sun set,
When the sun sets,
the love rises,
But the final moment,
that ends the day,
A light kiss,
and another memory.
Author notes
5-27-07
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A contest entry
- Kiss And Tell by WarmHeartedGeisha.
550 points, ended May 31, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wow this is really good. I liked how u it repeats:
When the sun sets,
the love rises,
These 2 lines r good, and I really liked:
But the final moment,
that ends the day,
A light kiss,
and another memory.
Great job!
P.S. Plz do not respond 2 my comment
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Beautiful. I love the imagery and emotion in this piece. Well done.
Have a wonderful day and good luck in the contest,
FallenPoeticAngel
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