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unfinished

All this suffering is polluting my life
What if i just sleep forever and end my strife?
You ignore my pleas and tears
The urge to die is worse when i shut my eyes
What happened to your promises,
And the things you said when my life had no creases?
You don't even believe that i love you
Now you don't even care about me, but i can't loath you too

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  • poet-guy17
    June 1, 2007

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    This may be unfinished, but it is very good. You have me to talk to =). Your AP bf, ~Ľũčąś~.