You hold my hand and talk to me,
I'm held in your' arms so gently
It truly is a mystery how she can slowly let you go.....
I'm holding your hand we're walking away
From the love you used to share,
She doesn't even care.....
She knows that it's happening
That your slipping from her grasp,
And I still hold your hand tightly like a clasp.....
Your love is degrading,
Away it's slowly fading,
And I still hold your hand as this tragic story unfolds.....
I'm holding your hand,
This disaster was planned
Your love crashed & burned.....
I'm holding your hand,
But now your truly mine,
And the love we have.....
Is so hard to define.
Author notes
#3 ♥ razorblade kisses ♥
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A nice poem here. A truly lovely closing stanza! well penned. Thank you for entering xxxx
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omg i love this poem. i know who its about ;]] this is really sweet. and that.....one person sounds really romantic. i hope you end up going out with him.
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hmm...this makes me want to know more about what lies beneath the poem. This was interesting and made me think. Thanks for your entry and goodluck!
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Such an interesting story it truly is...
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