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Fat Boy

LOOK at him
He's not slim
Certainly not
Tiny Tim

Chicken, Pork,
Potatoes and Gin.

Why they laugh?
It's just so mean
I will never
Ever be lean

--BUT--
Who really cares
If I like spam
I AM ACTUALLY HAPPY
WITH WHO I AM!!!!

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This was written a long time ago......
Written August 2nd, 2003

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  • Crayzypoet
    August 25, 2003
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    Do Not Touch It!

    AWWWWWWWWWWWW This is such a cute poem..I really really loved it..the way you talked about being overweight and still loving who you are..it's the inside that counts..as long as you got inner beauty..that's what I call real beauty hehe..really cute..this is such a good poem..sends such a great message..thanx for sharing..keep it up!


  • imlost
    August 2, 2003
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    lol aw! so very cute! i loved that poem so much! hehe spam
    keep up the wonderful work
    ~Rain marie~


  • finding myself 84
    August 2, 2003
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    LOL yes very very cute! Spam is good! Hey now don't you be ripping on it or anything! Luv ya chick *sonya*

  • Its-Me-Death
    August 2, 2003
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    I like it

    I liked that. It was kinda funny. I don't like spam though. I used to feel like this so I can see where it's coming from.

  • palefire
    August 2, 2003
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    Cute, with a perky, confident message
    *Alex

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