Prologue
Roses are red,
Violets are blue
Clichés are old
My words are new
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Thirty One Million, Five Hundred And Thirty Six Thousand Seconds…And Counting…
T hank you for all the sweet kisses
W here you held your head close to mine
E ntwining our hands as we slowly embrace
L ovingly send shivers down my spine
V elvet smooth skin I long to hold
E ver so delicate to the touch
M issing the way that you hug me
O nly always and so much
N ever will I stop feeling
T he emotions I have towards you
H eartbeats will always keep skipping
S o long as yours always do too
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One Year Of Happiness
One year of holding hands
One year where we took a chance
One year of laughs and one year of smiles
One year of far too many miles
One year of loving from deep within
One year of kissing, sharing our skin
One year of being in each others arms
One year protecting each other from harm
One year of hugging, holding you tight
One year of romance, fun and delight
One year of beauty, innocence and praise
One year to cherish, forever, always
One year with you, so full of bliss
Is a whole lifetime’s worth of happiness
A year of passion, joy, mine and yours
Hopefully followed by many years more
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Forever Grateful
T imeless memories, always mine
H earts on fire as souls entwine, with
A ll our sweetness and all our strength
N ever will this have to end
K nowing we always have each other
Y oung but still very much lovers
O nly apart for a short while
U ntil we can finally share our smiles
Our Love
One year of your love
One year of my love
One year of our love
One year of true love
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Engraved Memories [21 Lines, 21st May]
The water park, the football pitch,
“Fucking Barstard”, our first kiss,
All my memories of perfect bliss
Tiny moments I share forever
With the weight of nought, nought but a feather
But in my heart, I will always treasure
Under the stars, St Catherine’s Hill
Bournemouth beach, “watching” films
Nursing me better when I was ill
Tiny moments that make me smile
That makes me laugh, or make me cry
Those tiny moments…that make up my life
The paddling pool, our caterpillar friend
Wishing each time it didn’t have to end
Our perfect, sweet, short weekends
Tiny moments, huge in my mind
Because they are only yours and mine
Kept safe together for all of time
Going to Greece, Chopsticks too
For this and more, I thank you
For these are the reasons why I love you
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One Line For Each Month
For all the laughter we have shared, I thank you
For the great times you have shown me, even more
For everything you have given and given up for me
I cannot tell you how much I adore
The feelings I have for you are priceless
You can’t put a value on love
And I long for the time when we’re always together
So I don’t have to miss your soft-sensual touch
I’ll try and always repay the favour
By always being here by your side
And I’d give up everything if I needed to
Because I just want you here in my life
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Five Hundred And Twenty Five Thousand, Six Hundred Minutes…So Far…
O mnipotent
N ow and always
E vergreen is our love
Y ours: truly, madly, deeply
E ternally, endlessly
A lways and now
R eligiously
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In Dances With Butterflies
Hold me in your fragile arms
And slowly shut your eyes
Kiss me like the first time, as
In dance the butterflies
Slowly shut your weary eyes
And I’ll protect you while you sleep
I’ll fight off all your broken dreams
And things that make you weak
Kiss me like the first time
Let that spark again ignite
As if it were a blossoming star
Quietly shining in the night
In dances with butterflies
Where we can’t come to harm
I’ll kiss you and protect you still
In my fragile, broken arms
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I Love You
I long for you to be near me
L ove the sweet smile in your voice
O nly you can make me feel special
V ehemently my only choice
E ternity patiently awaits us
Y ours forever, just me and you
O nly we can make it together
U nsung heroes through and through
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Epilogue
Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
The clichés are in
I’ll always love you
Author notes
Well they're personal, so I don't really care if you don't like them or not, there is only one person who I want to like them and she does so, if you don't, I don't want to know!
Option 1, Happy Love!!
Option 1, One Year
BarbedWireShield
I'm sorry, I'm not sure if this is allowable because it is actually 12 poems (one for each month). And more lines than 120, though I think if you just take the poems they are less than 120 lines so...let me know.
In a list
A contest entry
- Allpoetry One Year Anniversary Contest by Tali28.
900 points, ended June 17, 2007, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I YEAR TOGETHER AND I STILL ADORE YOU by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended March 3, 2008, 42 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I really liked this ... it was very brilliant ... twelve poems for twelve months ... genius ... thank you so much ... good luck in the contest and thank you for your entry
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Wow. this is amazing so many 1 year poems. I love them all. This is perfect for my contest and perfect for my relationship present for my beau. Thanks for entering.
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I'm glad you like them
I wish you good luck with your contest but also with your partner, I hope you stay together! x
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i am sorry but you have not changed the lines as you said you would. i am sorry but you will not place in the contest. thank you for entering and I am sorry to have you not place.
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The fact that it's just got spaces in it doesn't change the fact it is still 123 lines. I didn't say I'd remove the spaces...it would just look like a jumbled mess and not a poem then.
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there is also the fact that you have not placed your authors name in your notes. and it isn't fair to the other contestants. i'm sorry
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You know my Author's name because I replied to comments, then and now. Doesn't take a genius.
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that doesn't matter. of course I knew your name but you didn't add it like the rules asked. therefore, it is unfair to the contestants. if you are going to keep arguing with me I will not bother considering your poem which I was thinking of doing.
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So basically you're saying that rule was pointless. I don't see how you knowing or not knowing my name makes any difference to whether my poem deserves to win or not. I don't care whether you place it or don't but seeing as you told me you weren't going to place it and now you're saying you were thinking about it kinda makes me think like you have no idea. Do what you want, I really do not mind.
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i'm sorry i did not mean deserve to win, i meant fairness to the other contestants.
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123 lines is quiet fine. thank you for changing it (when you do) sorry i shall comment when i get back from school. good luck
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this is a little long...about 60 lines to long. sorry. I'll still comment though, but you won't win anything sorry. if you want you can take a poem out and throw it in instead of this one. i don't mind at all. the twelve poems is quite an interesting idea. something I haven't come across before. The acrostics is also something I don't see too much of so I was suprised to see them. You did a nice job. sorry you can't win anything. you can enter one or two of them or maybe six as in half a year sort of thing. i don't know. take it how you will. thank you for entering
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I just copied and pasted it into word and removed all the spaces between the poems. Including the individual titles it is 123 lines long. I understand if that is still too long though. And don't apologise, it's not your fault if I don't win anything, you have to stick to your rules so all is fair. Thanks for still commenting.
Good luck with your contest x
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awwwww this is beautiful! very LONG...but beautiful! I can feel the love in this piece. the way you have written it is unique and it is very personal and true of the heart! thank you for your wonderful entry!
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One poem for each month ^^
Sorry if this is meant to be anonymous, I never know which contests are and which aren't. If it is, pretend you ever saw me!
Thanks for your comment, take care and good luck with your contest x
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SIMPLY BREATHTAKING!
Amazing..........Just amazing, really.....For the first time ever....I mean like EVER......I am at a loss for suitable words to express my ever growing awe of your masterful and delightful work. So detailed, passionate, engaging. Love is like a miracle amoung the stars! (I guess I found my words again, but only after about five whole minutes of searching! LOL. Sorry, my ever lame humor) I'm blinded by the light and majesty of these pieces! You emotions are so real, I can almost feel them seeping into my soul. These pieces have touched me forever. Beautiful. Simply Breathtaking. This is exquisit work! Handyship, and handmade by a master of it's art! Wonderful, beautiful, and brimming with love! The emotions are extreme, but real........Beautiful.....Wonderful.........A miracle piece......May I add you to my favorites? -
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Hahaha and now who is the one being far too kind!!!
Don't worry I have the same lame sense of humour
Awww seriously stop embarrassing me now, just stop it!
You're so sweet, I'm glad my poems have touched you and you enjoyed them - comments like yours are the reason I write, they always make me feel so good
I think I have already added you to my favourites - do not feel you have to ask! (Though your politeness is also very sweet
Thanks again, it means so much x take care x
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I like how this feels as if to be several different works in one package. That is an interesting way of allowing the reader to better enjoy your work, in the sense that you take the care to provide something for everyone.
Always nice to see new ideas as I transverse the myriad works entered into this contest.
Thank you for your entry,
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Great poems of love. I really did like reading all of them. Very passionate and detailed. You have strong emotions and know how to express them well. Good luck in the contest. Take care.
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this poem is really really good
i think it's awesome
your an awesome poet
i really like it it's awesome your really cool
good luck in the contest
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well, as i am a judge in this contest i will give my honest opinion as that is my job. i suppose it is a great thing that i really like this poem. it is one of the few i have seen where the lack of punctuation does not detract from the writing itself. {a personal preference} i hope she likes it as well as i did. i wish you luck in this qualifier round. viyanna rosemarie
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Very Nice
Love is different for everyone. Yours seems strong and I did enjoy reading your works. Good luck in the contest, The Shaker -
Thanks
Thanks for your entry. I will be back after the contest ends to comment.
Tali
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"I'm breathless"!!
What a superb write, loads of everthing in there to do with romance. Very skilfuly put together, another super write. Good luck in the contest. (should be a winner) WASP.
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Thank you for your wonderful words of wisdom My computer is broken and I'm stealing minutes here and there on my sisters laptop so sorry if I don't reply quickly. Thanks again and take care x
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haha .. I LIKE IT !!!
really george, this is very very beautiful
each poem was excellent
( I especially liked the prologue, but gots no one to use it on at the moment.)
I don't know if you hesitated when posting this
But I did more than hesitation when I posted 14 Notes
And it was really damaging me to put in each note
each little writing that I spend hours to make
and even more hours to put together
writing each of them in my own handwriting
Giving them to random people
Giving them a time to go and just give it to yash
Then checking and making sure everyone I gave it to .. gave him
God, now I wish I didn't remember that.
but yea..
All the best to you both
and once again, this is more than beautiful
love ya, bro
NeveR ♥
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The only reason I hesitated in posting this was so Thom wouldn't read them before I gave her her present with them all on (which she loved!) hehe. She had to go today though =[...aww well I'm seeing her again in a few weeks! Thank you for your continued loveliness. Take care of yourself big sis! x lots of love and hugs x
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This is a truly beautiful selection of poetry!! An enjoyment to read such words which flowed from your heart! The emotion is well expressed and i thank you for your delightful entry!! xxxx
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Thank you for your lovely comment, I'm glad you enjoyed it x take care x
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Wow, you have been busy! This is really a great tribute to your memories of love. Very unique, and wonderful the way you have woven all of them together. Just too sweet!..
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Very busy indeed! Hehe thank you as always for your comments, they are always appreciated (and always so lovely!) x take care x
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Ahh, this is so sweet, and so very romantic!
It is touching to read the words of someone so in love. Wonderful writing..~Pastel
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Thank you for your lovely comment, it means a lot hehe. Thank you for the applause too x
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*blinks* Wow. This does seem really personal...like a dedication or something. All the little links make it really...interwoven. This is really special.
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Hehehe yeah very personal, thank you for your wonderful comment it is very much appreciated. Take care x
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