Rose petals flirt upon my bed sheet
as sensual moans melt in serene bliss
exotic sweat releases from long time of stress
Love disolves as the heart faithfully digest
Erotic fragrance dazzles my soul
Like winter coat, I shield the heart from snowflakes
Soothing waves caress breathless feelings
and convert sleepy emotions into full blue moon
Squeeze lemon juice stirs passion in tasteless margueritta
Leaving the tongue with a bitter taste of longing nectar
Pilgrimate sensations whisper angelic moans
as passenger rays filter dawn with gentle caress
raging hormones shed sensitive wax
and the mind catches everlasting goosebumps
Author notes
MACKIE
OR
MACKINTOCH
A contest entry
- True Love by Samantha Marie.
450 points, ended October 5, 2008, 64 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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ah such pleasant imagery, bravo!
amazing write
Thanks for entering and good luck! -
Really erotic and colorful and a pleasure to read. Thanks for entering my contest, and best of luck.
David
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An erotic portrait so well painted. I loved the imagery in this poem.
from the rose petals flirting to the everlasting goosebumps. Just wonderful!!
Blessings,
Azlyn
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I love the words you used for this poem. Good job.
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Oh wonderful I love your words inthis. So sensual and most erotic. Beautifully penned.
Gaylene
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Everlasting goosebumps!! this was sensually riveting..Great work...Love it! ~Pastel
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ohhh this is beautiful very well done i totally love it xxx
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