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~~~Be cool~~~



Close down doors that boil.
When they churn your instincts
let innocence be your folly
that lets a mystifying question
unravel out of illusions to life.




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  • 2lullabyhaven
    June 10, 2007
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    This is good. Thanks for entering my contest


  • individuality gold member
    May 27, 2007

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    a good poem here - though as i have said to two other people already in this contest, under 5 lines the contest states 5 is 5, 4 and below is under 5.