Oh my love
whenever you tempt me to cherish
I am twisted into a swimmer
the way you uncover your stream of desires
it mobilizes me to analyze you a jetting watercourse
and I am threaded to swoop in it
precisely when you energetically actuate me with you
right downward where I spot you like a specialized heaven
where your secret filaments encounter me
with all the thrills of a wonderland
Oh my love...
Author notes
Based on a picture...
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2351324
A contest entry
- Close Your Eyes... by poet2angels.
700 points, ended May 28, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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' I am threaded to swoop in it.....precisely when you energetically actuate me with you, right downward where I spot you like a specialized heaven'...wow...this makes the title worthy...the thrills...I feel as though I just went over the big hill on the rollercoaster and now am freefalling down the other side...aieeee!...lol...sweet write! Peace, Rhonda
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lovely
Such wonderful imagery and emotion in this piece!
TY for entering and best wishes in the contest
Lynda
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