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Mirror Tears

I saw my mood
Reflected in a teardrop,
Rainbow of gloom
And darkfelt sorrow.
There, the prism
Of my unhappiness.
After it was brushed away
I felt no better.
Why?

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  • just a voice
    August 3, 2007
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    I really dont know why. I think we all go through this at times. Well... maybe not that specificly... hell I dont really know exactly what your going through but I'm sure we've all gone through something like this. Anyways I really love the poem. It was well writter and flowed smoothly. Great job.