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Bite fight bull



The bull, tall
              big boulder like body
Broad fanlike ears
                  Whale like eyes
Broom-like tail
              Tunnel like trunk
Pipe like tusks
              Pillar like legs
Fingers at the nose end
                      While playing with the soil
Picked up an ant,
                Wise and clever,
Which got into the tunnel
                        And gave a hard bite,
Sending the bull mad.

Off went the bull
                Bumped on to an ox
And the ox out of terror
                        Hit a pillar so hard
That the bull tottering fell.

        Oh God! What a fall it was.

The surgeon came with his syringe,
                                And fifty bottles of glucose
Didn’t lift the beast up.
                        The ant now free
Gave another happy injection
                            And all was well with beast.


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  • janejainejayne gold member
    June 30, 2007

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    I am smiling!

    Why would I smile at such a story so full of grief and violence? Yet here I am smiling like a loon! Wonderful! Jane


  • MahoganyFlow
    May 31, 2007

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    Love the imagery used in this. You have a very unique way of writing. I like to see that. This was a good write. Keep Writing~~