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For You...

I used to think love was fake
just something someone made up
to give people false hopes
and empty dreams that would never be fulfilled
then I met you and that all changed
I still was waiting to awake
from what I thought was a dream
but I quickly realized I was
far from being asleep
and that you jus made my life
so much better that I thought
it was too good to be true
even though we're not together right now
thoughts of you still give me
a new reason to wake up every morning
a new reason to continue breathing
and a new reason to love you even more
with each passing day
I think back on the times we shared
and I realize that you really do care
and unlike all the rest the feelings
inside you really are there
I never thought a guy like you
could ever feel anything for someone like me
but you came in my life and made me realize
that I am just as deserving of love as anyone else
you love me despite my many flaws
even at my weakest moments 
you keep me strong by telling
me everything would be ok 
you show me what love really was
and that I was capable of loving
you love me even when I don't love myself
you make me feel beautiful
even when I don't see it
you give me hopes that nobody
else has been able to give me
and you have impacted my life in so many ways
without you I don't know where I'd be
so I just want to say thank you for everything
and I love you more then i have ever loved any other guy
and I jus hope that one day we'll be together

Author notes

this is for the guy that I love with all my heart and soul and i just hope one day he will be in my life as more then jus a friend cuz without him I'm sure i wouldn't be here and he means so much to me and I love him!

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  • Tenshi Asakura
    May 29, 2007

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    this is a very sweet poem. full of real emotion. its different from many other love poems i have read. the flow of it was really good.


  • debilynn
    May 27, 2007

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    a beautiful love poem. full of devotions, love and expectations. hope this happens for you. thank you for sharing this. keep writing! God bless you always


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    May 27, 2007
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    GrrrrrrrrI 4got to add the applauses so sorry


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    May 27, 2007

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    Beautiful

    Aww this is such a very lovly penned poem all round and I really love how you just pen away such love through out poetry. any ways a very well penned poem and just amazing. keep up the very good work


  • wingsofgold25 gold member
    May 27, 2007

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    Amazing

    This is an amazing love poem, Actually more of a LOve Story.
    Writes and sounds like something you could find in a book a book you might find on the Best seller list.
    So full of love and devotion and expectations.
    Just like a Dream that is beginning to come true.

    As for the Poem it is so very well written, well constructed and the Flow is so smooth.
    And what a Lucky Guy, to have someone like you.

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