where were you today
I missed you, dear
how you make me smile
and wonder about our daily normalities
where'd you go Mary Jane
did you get bored of this life
sick of going in and out of ours
being used and passed around
can't say that I blame you
I'd get tired of it too
but it seems none of us
have grown the least bit weary of you
[will we ever]
Mary Jane, we can't find you, dear
you're not hiding... are you
where'd you run off to
we missed you today
Please tell me what you think
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I like how the beginning and the end comes together with the word missed. You have a mistery here, and it makes me wonder. I get cuorius and you make me wanna know more about Mary Jane. Like that you named the piece that too.
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yes, I find this interesting. I like the personification.
'being used and passed around'
very nice. :]
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=)
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Had to read this when I saw the title....
Mmm...Mary Jane....So many ways this can be taken...just depends on who or what we think Mary Jane is...I really love it!
Like... "how you make me smile
and wonder about our daily normalities"
And.... "did you get bored of this life
sick of going in and out of ours
being used and passed around"
Love the double entendres!
Except that I apparently can't spell entendres. What fun.
Love and light,
Jenna
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Ahh yes, just what I was going for, the double meanings and such. I wanted you to wonder what this is about, though I'm sure you can guess. XD
Gracias for the comment! :]
Madison
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