I never noticed what I had untill I lost it
Why was I so blind?
Why did I denied the fact that I trully loved you?
You showed me ways
You showed me good days
And what did you get in return?
A crushed heart in witch I caused
Why didn't I notice?
Now that I know I'm sure I lost you
I want to cry
I feel I want to die
I miss you and thats one thing I know
But I still ask mysef
Why didn't I notice???
A contest entry
- For all of my past contest-winners... by WhollySurrendered.
475 points, ended August 5, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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thanks for entering and good luck.
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not too bed
Hey, Good choice of words, I know what its like to be the person that isn't noticed, its not good, but I also know what its like to not see something right in front of you until its too late, your emotions pour out to the reader through very amazing words, nicely done!
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woOt!
hey girl.. this is awonderfull poem
I love it.. it touched my heart.. wow..very emotional..
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really interesting
haha I like to see you grow and your growing so fast I like your beautiful peace lets all make our love last, hey cos master bo ta hasi swa keep it like this!
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mi ta bai dunabo mas punten!!!!!
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Hey.. Mi no twt sa bo por rijm!! master!! SINJAMI NO?
e ta fucking master.... pero esaki bo a skirbi pa??? uhhm... me dont know... bms pero eta master!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Beautiful Piece!!! This is a great poem!! It has passion behind it!!! It was great!! This poem made me feel sad for you!! I have been right where you are!! & I know it seems hard right now but you will one day find another person to make your heart skip a beat!!! I mean it took me over a year to get over my 1st love and yeah i have guys i screwed around with for that year but I finaly found a guy to settle me down and make me want a relationship!!! So it could take awhile but U will find love again!! I promise that!!! Great write!!!
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