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Could you be more crazy?

Combined Conclusion of the Consequences
Of Calculated Consistent bad behavior
Culminates in Curious eyes watching
as Camouflaged Caustic slips away
Creeping Cleverly Close to your Conniving thoughts

Chucking aside the Connection and the Criticism of most
and Cooking up further Cantankerous behavior
Clueless of the ramifications you Claw your way
Carefully and Clumsily to the Climax
Caring nothing for who is Caught in your Creepy trap

Come away from the Circus you Clown
and Cecum to demands
Cease this Crazy Catapulting Criminal behavior
Call out for help and I will Come running

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  • sheltered
    June 11, 2007
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    Crazy-cool and captivating. Congratulations.


  • Whoochi gold member
    May 28, 2007

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    Love this illiterationa nd the use of the letter C,,, this is brilliant and I applaud you for this stunning job! Good luck!


  • Griswold gold member
    May 27, 2007

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    Brilliantly written Janice, But one word in here i just have never in my life seen before "Cecum." I am pretty well read but this one is new to me. Good job...Scott


    • Janice M Pickett
      May 27, 2007
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      Hi MJK

      LOL thanks for the comment Cecum means blind in Latin LOL. IT fitted so I used it, It also relates to the Circus which I was talking about in the poem.
      Hugs
      Jan


  • BlackRabbit9x
    May 26, 2007

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    Nice job, keep me reading and re-reading!!
    I love the usage of what I call "new" words, words that you don't normally see within pieces, but bring the piece itself to a higher level.

    Good luck in the contest!


    • Janice M Pickett
      May 27, 2007
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      Thanks BR

      What a great contest. I was ready to write a few more I had such fun. Thanks for the idea.
      HUGS
      Jan

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