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Glorious

Gloom gone, as orb rises
Glittering selflessly
Golden rays pierce earth’s sphere
Gently, without malace
Glorifying the night
Gladden eyes, sweeten thoughts
God’s creation imbibes


        ~*~

A contest entry

Pleiades Picture Competition VI

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  • Angels Delight
    June 11, 2007

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    Well Done

    My dear poet

    In these very uncertain times we live in and with all the heartache, death, lust and hate it is hard to show ones faith but I am so glad I decided to host this contest because so many of my fellow poets have raised their hands to this challenge and said WE BELIEVE... That blows my mind...It brings a warm feeling into my heart and reminds me of God and that said He would never forsake us...

    The poem itself was brilliant...So few words yet so powerful...It packs a punch as one would say

    Thank you so much for entering my contest and I do wish you only the best of luck

    Much Love
    Tessa


  • ShelleyA gold member
    June 5, 2007
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    Good title. Good write. Good imagery, flow and tone. Lovely depth of feelings. Vivid descriptives. Good word choice. Nice alliteration and assonance. Your faith shines through in this piece. Your poem suits the picture for which it was written. Thank you for your entry. Shelley


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    May 30, 2007

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    This is very descriptive, really painting a picture for the reader. Love the final line.
    The title, though, is very weak.
    How about "Glorious" instead?