~First Verse~
Can you feel the love that
I want to shower you with
Can you feel how much I
Want to be part of your life
~Chorus~
You wanna give me an answer
Baby, I know you want to
All you have to do is say so
Love, we'll be together forever
~Second Verse~
I'll be here with open arms
Waiting for you to come
My open arms are empty
All I need is you to fill them
~Chorus~
~Third Verse~
I'll smile and walk away
Knowing that you'll follow
You can't smile and walk away
Because you can't let me go
~Chorus~
~Third Verse~
You can't keep running away
From me and all my love
I can't keep running away
From your sweet character
~Chorus~
~Fourth Verse~
Your my high school sweetheart
I can't just let you walk away
I'm your high school sweetheart
We're destined to stay together
~Chorus~
~Fifth Verse~
There can't be no pain when
It comes to living life
There can't be no pain when
You're in love either
~Chorus~
~Sixth Verse~
Go ahead and cry all you want
I'll be here to comfort you
Can I cry on your shoulder
When I need to let go too?
~Chorus~
~Seventh Verse~
If you say yes, I'll be happy
You will be too, and we'll
Be there for each other always
To live our lives together
~Chorus~
~Ending~
I can't express my love enough
But I'll love you forever
This is my promise to you
Author notes
Option #2
A contest entry
- ~~~ HOLY MOLEY~~~ 6 Options availiable~~~OH YEA UH HU! by badddgirl.
900 points, ended May 30, 2007, 5 entries
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A very pretty song this is for sure!
Love poems and songs just capture my heart
Thank you so much for sharing and for being a part of this contest! -
Fabulous song, The lyrics are great!
Thanks for entering my contest -
Jeneralix,
First off, Thank you very much for your entry in my contest =]
Second, I love this song, I found myself singing along with the words and hearing music playing with it
Fabulous lyrics !
Excellent !
Best of luck =]
Stay safe
~Amanda
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Beautiful. You posted...fast...haha.
Thank you very much.
I thought it was really funny, if not cute that you labelled each verse. made me smile
This is very well done, thank you.
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to be honest
to be honest i really hope you win the contest
its an awsome song -
Very Impressive work here!
Ladies and gentlemen, This poet has done something amazing here, SHE has used every title that I gave you options to use, and made a beautiful song.
~~FYI you are only required to use 2 of the titles,make sure you place them in correct spot.~~
Sorry dear for probably embarrassing you, but this is wonderful!
I'll be here with open arms
Waiting for you to come
My open arms are empty
All I need is you to fill them
This is just beautiful!
Thanks for sharing.
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