Loving,
As always like~
No other one but you,
Its only you that meets my dream,
Nothing more fulfilling than loving you,
My lovely dove with brown eyes,
Beginning and the end,
Passionate act,
Loving.
Please tell me what you think
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My dear friend, it seems you have found a love that shines within your heart and soul. Whom has stolen your heart my dear friend and helped you pen such a beautiful write from your true and golden spirited heart. much love my dear friend xxxx
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Wow
U did amazing job with this poem it is gorgeous talent its beauiful write that you have described.
My lovely dove with brown eyes,
Beginning and the end,
Passionate act,
Loving.
wow amazing words that u have showed and expressed. lovely poem and great great words. Keep da ink flowin cause ya talent is amazing. once again bravo job!
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This piece is so beautiful! Though love can barely be defined, you have shown what it means to you. Your words are detailed, emotional, and flow well. It seems that this piece may be in form, but I am unsure. Also, I love how you started and ended the piece with the same word. It makes it seem as though all begins with love, as well as, ends with love. Happy early birthday, keep up the great writing, and thanks for sharing this lovely piece!
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Spectacular Sensuality
You have captured the purity of love, in some very beautiful words of emotions. Is this a mirrored cinquain? I know it form poerty and its just wonderfully written...Excellent writing........Ma
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Ok, where are your new poems? Forgot to post here again?
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hi there,
wow...a romantic piece. Brown eyes? hmmm, won't you introduce her to me?
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Viva la passion
A most sensuous stirring write of major proportions.
Wow, I like your passionate side.
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