My bloody hand holds the knife,
the one that caused the death.
My long blond hair is matted,
My eyes prove I'm on meth.
The corpse lay before me,
A simple work of art,
The ashen face turned towards me,
From where it lay in the dark.
My eyes stare at the body.
I wanted one more life.
So I preyed upon the innocent,
Carved out his heart with a kife.
I stapled up the wound.
And said a little prayer.
I patted the bloody head,
"Friend, life's never fair".
I hugged the still warm body,
And kissed the blood stained brow.
I stood and with a smile,
left with the sweetest bow.
A contest entry
- In A Mind Of Darkniss by Myth Of Twilight.
890 points, ended June 5, 2007, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Cherry Lip Gloss by xx-shatteredsoul-xx.
300 points, ended May 29, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - SCARE ME TO DEATH by thelovesongwriter.
410 points, ended June 6, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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great job! but there's not enough imagery and gore, and that's what i focused on for my contest. Other than that, it was great! good luck
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fuckin ay right dawgie! this is AMAZING!! i really like it! definately finalist material
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hells yaa that is great short and sweet tight job the stroy was sweet thank you for join this poem has made my day your one hella of a poet i hope to read more from this day best of luck in my contest and best to you thank you for join and hell ill even bow to you-bows-
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