The sorrowful expression
Leaves me alone to contemplate
Past feelings and emotions
Dwelling on my souls misery
I take the wings of death
And fly to the depths of hell
To ask to be released
From this torment I endure
The cruel looks and blank stares
The feeling of being constantly alone
Unloved by the one I love
Unforgivably cursed to the extent of destruction
Ripping my soul into unfixable pieces
They lay on the floor of my broken spirit
Covered in my own dying blood
Ending my rejected existence
A contest entry
- Teenage Tragedy by MagazinesFall.
390 points, ended May 31, 2007, 13 entries
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Comments
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This poem is real, I can easily relate to this piece.
Good Luck with the contest!
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Leaves me leaves me alone to contemplate
you have leaves me twice...is that intended?
my existence is constantly rejected...it's like you can be right there and still no one sees you as if your in such a huge crowd that you just blend into one of them.....hmm very well done...
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