Faces of discrimination seek
Dances of jewels break
Vodka spills breath of lies
Sober a word of reality
Glitter and sequins stunning sight
Girls and boys passed around
Deals of desire met
Underground confused by gender
Love hating lustful illusions
Shame of sex for crucifixion
Drugs for pain of mind
Hell's gates have opened
A sick price for white lies
Ride the twisted winds
Screaming for empty mercy
Author notes
Option 7: Used words: desire, screaming, confused, sick, glitter, drugs, vodka, love
Been having more and more dark thoughts lately. Mostly of hell. Could be seen as a potential bad thing.
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Comments
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The flow was great. The choice of words was one of the better poems I have read. Good luck
Ray -
i loved reading this poem it flowed and had a nice use of words...good luck
~Wolf~ -
This is really good, sadly this sort of thing really happens.
Good luck in the contest
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oo this is dark, i like it alot, well done on the use of words i love the last 2 lines 'Ride the twisted winds
Screaming for empty mercy' its beautifuly dark. well done thanx for entering xx
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