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i miss you

i miss you
i miss your touch
it made me feel safe
i miss it so much

i miss your laugh
and seeing your smile
i wish i could rewind and
see it again, only for a while

i miss you
you were so caring
i miss you
and the conversations we were always sharing

i miss looking in your eyes
and knowing you would be here
and letting me know i have you
and you would never dissappear

i miss your hugs
they made me feel warm and safe
and now that i dont have them
i just hide in my won little place

i hate it when your sad
i miss being there for you
when i was around
i tried not to let you feel blue

i miss you
that is all i can say
i regret what i did
each and everyday

i miss the fun times
we had talking to one another
now it hurts to talk to you
so why even bother

i miss you
but it doesnt change a thing
everything just
stays the same

i hope your life is full
of love and happiness
and not like it usually is
which is full of sadness

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this is something i wrote for someone, but this person is staying anonymous, if you want to know who it is IM me. this is just my thoughts wrote into a poem

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  • night sky mystery
    May 28, 2007
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    aww wow i like this poem,i too have this feeling too and know it too well.
    'i miss the fun times
    we had talking to one another
    now it hurts to talk to you
    so why even bother

    i miss you
    but it doesnt change a thing
    everything just
    stays the same'
    i really like these lines,they are powerful and very true.
    Great write


  • Valdar Cuebiyari
    May 27, 2007

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    This is a very pretty poem. I believe that I know who it is reffering too also. There is something that I disagree with in the poem.

    "i miss the fun times
    we had talking to one another
    now it hurts to talk to you
    so why even bother"

    It matters everything that you "bother" to talk. Keep trying for the friendship at least....Too many people are just too willing to give up too easily on stuff like this. I know it hurts, but even if it's purely for the other persons sake, keep it up...

    Good write.


  • ScArLeM
    May 26, 2007
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    that is a beautiful poem. what did u do that u regrtet?

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